Im new to the fourm and also new to the whole short film thing. This is a short for a school film festival. Well anyways heres the script, and like i said im new to this fourm and i dont know if you guys are dicks but if you dont like at least give me advice id like to improve, tell me how to formate it and stuff. Thanks in advance.
Andrew Chae
Devo
A film about a dance and a boy.
Staring:
Kevin Goudswaard
Shayla Curran
Summery: Kevin is a boy full of himself and wants to show is skill in dance. He calls a dance studio and sets up an appointment and already acts a little cocky, plus he thinks the girls voice is hot/cute. He gets dressed in a ridiculous outfit and heads out the door. He hops in his car and speeds away. The next scene opens up in the dance studio. He introduces himself do a cute blond girl who is his teacher. He keeps to his usual ways and tries to impress her. They walk into a room and she puts on a song and tries to show him a move or two. With a little scoff he push her out of the way and points to the kid working the boom box who seems to be indifferent or emotionless. He pushes the teacher off stage and begins his dance. The dance is ridiculous and sort of Napoleon Dynamite-ish. At the end of his dance he walks out after bumping into a girl who compliments him, but he still storms out. He gets in his car and speed away.
+Kevin (inner) Looking into a mirror, flexing and admiring himself-: DANG Im smokin’. But this body would look better dancing.
Kevin goes the phone and dials (the camera zooms on the keypad): Hello? Hi miss I would like to schedule a dance lesson, not that I need it, (he pause to allow for the other end to talk) Great! Ill see you at noon then.
-he hangs up and dances up to his room Kevin reemerges from his room still dancing in his dance outfit and still dancing he puts on his coat and walks out the door. The camera is now outside and see him coming out the door then in to the car. Camera cuts to in the car and he turns it on. Cuts back to out side and Kevin pulls away. Back in the car Kevin put forever young (original) on his ipod. He pulls into the parking lot and gets out slams the door and walks into the studio. Camera cuts to inside as he walks in. Go goes up the desk.
++ Kevin: Hey hot pants, your pretty cute, when do I start.(arrogant)
++ Shayla: Ehe hem, well we can start as soon as your ready, im your teacher, Shayla (pleasant)
++ Kevin: Well then!(enticed) Lets do. What do we learn first and side leap, kickflip carioca.
++ Shayla: Actaully lets start of with a sha-say let me put on some music.
- Shayla claps her hands and the boom box boy turns it on some music.
++ Kevin: This is lame.
++ Shayla: This is my favorite song.
- They both stair at each other and the camera cuts back and forth. Then Kevin points the the boom box boy without lookling and just noods his head. Forever young comes on and Kevin dances.(for about 2-3 minutes he gets sweater every cut.)
++ Kevin: I don’t need this place im going to try out for J Lo.
-Kevin walks out
++ Camden: That was pretty good (sincerely).
++ Kevin what would you know.
- Kevin leaves the studio gets into his car and speeds away. Forever young (original) comes on slowly and credits roll.
Andrew Chae
Devo
A film about a dance and a boy.
Staring:
Kevin Goudswaard
Shayla Curran
Summery: Kevin is a boy full of himself and wants to show is skill in dance. He calls a dance studio and sets up an appointment and already acts a little cocky, plus he thinks the girls voice is hot/cute. He gets dressed in a ridiculous outfit and heads out the door. He hops in his car and speeds away. The next scene opens up in the dance studio. He introduces himself do a cute blond girl who is his teacher. He keeps to his usual ways and tries to impress her. They walk into a room and she puts on a song and tries to show him a move or two. With a little scoff he push her out of the way and points to the kid working the boom box who seems to be indifferent or emotionless. He pushes the teacher off stage and begins his dance. The dance is ridiculous and sort of Napoleon Dynamite-ish. At the end of his dance he walks out after bumping into a girl who compliments him, but he still storms out. He gets in his car and speed away.
+Kevin (inner) Looking into a mirror, flexing and admiring himself-: DANG Im smokin’. But this body would look better dancing.
Kevin goes the phone and dials (the camera zooms on the keypad): Hello? Hi miss I would like to schedule a dance lesson, not that I need it, (he pause to allow for the other end to talk) Great! Ill see you at noon then.
-he hangs up and dances up to his room Kevin reemerges from his room still dancing in his dance outfit and still dancing he puts on his coat and walks out the door. The camera is now outside and see him coming out the door then in to the car. Camera cuts to in the car and he turns it on. Cuts back to out side and Kevin pulls away. Back in the car Kevin put forever young (original) on his ipod. He pulls into the parking lot and gets out slams the door and walks into the studio. Camera cuts to inside as he walks in. Go goes up the desk.
++ Kevin: Hey hot pants, your pretty cute, when do I start.(arrogant)
++ Shayla: Ehe hem, well we can start as soon as your ready, im your teacher, Shayla (pleasant)
++ Kevin: Well then!(enticed) Lets do. What do we learn first and side leap, kickflip carioca.
++ Shayla: Actaully lets start of with a sha-say let me put on some music.
- Shayla claps her hands and the boom box boy turns it on some music.
++ Kevin: This is lame.
++ Shayla: This is my favorite song.
- They both stair at each other and the camera cuts back and forth. Then Kevin points the the boom box boy without lookling and just noods his head. Forever young comes on and Kevin dances.(for about 2-3 minutes he gets sweater every cut.)
++ Kevin: I don’t need this place im going to try out for J Lo.
-Kevin walks out
++ Camden: That was pretty good (sincerely).
++ Kevin what would you know.
- Kevin leaves the studio gets into his car and speeds away. Forever young (original) comes on slowly and credits roll.
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