Re: First Music Video - Selfish Minds
Visually: great job. Nice color and color corr. In my mind the beauty haze kind of conflicts with the type of music as does the pace of the visuals. Seems like everything should be grungier and going faster along with the music. Especially when the beat goes to the double-time piece. Shots like the car turning the corner and pulling up to the tracks seem to kinda hang there a little too long. Maybe you could throw in more xtreme close-ups of fingers on the strings, sticks flying, bass drum kickin', lips singing, etc. Just my $.02.
Snap zooms didn't bug me because they seemed to be 'fast' along with the tempo.
As far as capturing some nice footage and having great lighting, great exposure, all is great, sound is great. Really the images you shot are very, very nice. Awesome job on the lip synch as well. The actors and band members also do great. I also like the band's setting. Outside the donut shop! Cool.
Long live storyboards!
Chico
Visually: great job. Nice color and color corr. In my mind the beauty haze kind of conflicts with the type of music as does the pace of the visuals. Seems like everything should be grungier and going faster along with the music. Especially when the beat goes to the double-time piece. Shots like the car turning the corner and pulling up to the tracks seem to kinda hang there a little too long. Maybe you could throw in more xtreme close-ups of fingers on the strings, sticks flying, bass drum kickin', lips singing, etc. Just my $.02.
Snap zooms didn't bug me because they seemed to be 'fast' along with the tempo.
As far as capturing some nice footage and having great lighting, great exposure, all is great, sound is great. Really the images you shot are very, very nice. Awesome job on the lip synch as well. The actors and band members also do great. I also like the band's setting. Outside the donut shop! Cool.
Long live storyboards!
Chico
The CD will be out in a month or so. You will be able to pick it up here: