A bit too green, and not a big fan of zooms, but great job! That's cool you filmed her fist communion, makes me remember mine haha .
A little overexposed in the middle with the montage of family members.
It's more of a film of what happened that day than your cousin's first communion, which is still cool.
Yeah, alittle too much on the green side. The extreme zooms don't work for me in this. There are exposure issues, especially in the middle (inside under, outside over). I am not quite sure what the random rack focuses on the flowers and the shots of the lizard have to do with the communion. I would have rather seen more shots of the actual ceremony.
Locking down on a tripod would make a big difference here. Also agree that the random fast zooms were overkill. Interesting choice though with Ben Folds...not sure the actual message of the song is right for this?