finished a short

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colfaxrev

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I rented 1 kino daylight 1 kino super green bulbs, and i own tungsten lights.

I just had to gel my 3 tungsten lights CTB

tell me what you guys think, this is also my director debut

I also engineered the gore effects (not super top of the line, but does the job)

https://vimeo.com/52055524

shot with T2i, 3 cheap lenses
 
yes its supposed to be spoofy, and i just decided to make them drive backwards yes good eye most people haven't caught that
 
Congrats on making your debut! Here's some of my view on your film : I think it had potential for much more. Were you downplaying the importance of some stuff because it was a spoof? There were some nice locations, the acting wasn't unbearable and the car looked cool. But then again, the sound was awful (I couldn't really hear the dialogue unless I turned up the volume but then the sound effects were blasting WAY too loud. People will be much more forgiving towards bad footage then bad audio.), the continuity of the shots was all over the place (and I suppose it was on purpose but it really didn't give any comical effect to the movie) and the creature was just horrible. In a bad way. Not in a comical bad way but in a bad way bad way, you know. Anyways, you completed something and that's what matters, right? Looking forward seeing more stuff from you!

Ville.
 
colfaxrev said:
I rented 1 kino daylight 1 kino super green bulbs, and i own tungsten lights.

I just had to gel my 3 tungsten lights CTB

tell me what you guys think, this is also my director debut

I also engineered the gore effects (not super top of the line, but does the job)

https://vimeo.com/52055524

shot with T2i, 3 cheap lenses
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For a 'driving to Burning Man', there was a total absence of naked women. For a 'gore/horror' film there was a total absence of naked women... and as we all know...

Absence makes the eyes go awander.
 
I'm moving this to user films. Perhaps there it will get more feedback regarding things other than cinematography, since this is posted by the director and such. I'm sorry for taking so long.

-ryan
 
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