SHORT: Finding Kismet- A Short Film

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brdplya1

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When two worlds collide, will it be fate or miss opportunity? When Stephen thinks he's met the love of his life, little did he know he had the wrong love. Michelle can't find the right man. Is she looking for the right things? Sit back and examine how stereotypes can lead to lost love and Finding Kismet.
 
first scene: the dialogues are a little to low, compared with the music. The effect of "the music seems to sound as loud as the dialogues and still the dialogues are understandeble and I realy don't know how they do it", is done by mixing/compression/using the "silent parts" in music pieces.... And it's not boomed...which also gives some problems of understanding.

Around 00:28 I hear a voice: "ok"...probably the director ?

Scene at the restaurant: anoying buzz sound coming from a lamp, or soundcable touching an electric cable or.....

People get bored when they have to watch a shot for more then 5 seconds.... Record more shots: reaction shots, close ups, inserts....

Let people talk without sound in "many people involved scenes", like the restaurant.

The scene with the 2 guys is better cutted. You get action/reaction...

The waiter throwing the drink....it's ...Well... He does it on purpose for me. You can see he just turns the plate

You used automatic focus ? Some shots have the wrong focus....

The acting of the 2 guys and 2 girls is good. So it's 90% of technical isues...(focus, sound, mixing, editing, having more shots)
 
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