Feel The Burn(2009): Short Comedy Film

[ctbullet]

hi guys

here's a short toilet based comedy film we wrote and shot in one afternoon. We used the on the Canon XL2 and edited using Premiere pro.
Enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=stmMm0_N7kc

P.S. contains some strong language

 

[zeroblank]

I enjoyed the story there's definitely some humor there. It did seem like you broke the 180 degree rule and I your continuity was off with the shaving cream on the kids face.

 

[ctbullet]

hey thanks for the comments

As for the 'continuity error' it was a written in joke. I thought it was so blatenly obvious that his face was now clean that it'd come off funny.

I'll double check into the 180 rule beaking

thanks again