feedback, please...

That looked so great! It was extremely interesting and held my attention from beginning to end. Although, I wasn't really sure if it was a documentary or a film. But either way it looks awesome. What did you use for editing?
 
great work. that was really good
it must of took long to shoot all that.

maybe having a clear conclution would be better at the end.
nice work!!
 
Thanks a lot guys...I'm using FCP...

And, yeah...you are right about that. I'll try and make some adjustments in regards to the ending...

Really appreciated you taking the time...

Thanks again
 
Really, really nice! Well done.
A clear conclutions is a good idea...but that was awesome.
Loved the colors...
 
I remember this from awhile back, you did originally say that this was going to be a documentary. I personally think it would be more interesting as one because it looks like you got a lot of interviews and it would be cool to hear them all.

Either way, good job.

-Ben
 
In the moment

In the moment

Actually, it became a feature documentary (www.inthemomentmovie.com). But I just don't have the same energy, time, and perhaps the same amount of courage of the "Four Eyed Monsters" guys to fight the system. And, well...it ended up in my drawer.

It didn't go anywhere special, and I was going seriously broke, and becoming increasingly disillusioned with all the struggles...Anyway, that's part of the business, and is now passed. It's a shame though, because I'm sure it has potential...

This little video is just one attempt to use part of that footage to create something for a little competition.

Thanks again guys, for the comments...

Cheers
 
This is very powerful! I applaud the editing, and the cinematography. I'm just getting into documentaries, and I would love to see something like this.
 
Nice images outside!
The indoor images didn't match how great the outdoor images looked.

Did you use a 35mm adapter? Also was this NTSC?
 
yes, NTSC...no 35 mm adapter...although I can't really remember, I think I used a polarizer for that second outdoor sequence of images...
 
i felt like i was watching a national geographic article leap off the pages. really beautiful. and just like life has no conclusions, sometimes neither should art. i liked the ending.
thanks
-k-
 
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