SHORT: Feedback on student film assignment

[AdrianPetrosian]

I just finished a short for class and was interested in hearing some feedback. Thanks!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SycWXKFsmPY&app=desktop

 

[Finn Yarbrough]

It's got great production value!
But here's the feedback: it's not really a "short," as much as a "scene," narratively speaking. And the color grade is pretty flat.

Nice editing and camera work.