Feedback on my first short please!

A few shots have blown out highlights (and sky sometimes), and I didn't care much for the random zooms...they didn't seem as planned or well executed as I am used to. I zoom during interviews too, but I try to cut out the lens movement because it is really jarring.
The background noise is a bit louder than I can bear...maybe hold the mic closer or have them speak into it?
Other than that the content of the piece is really enjoyable. It's good to see people getting involved.
 
Salvador,

Thank you for your feedback. You're right about the zooms. I have to work on that.....as well as getting a better setup to capture audio.....part of the interviews weren't even externally miked....I will work on improving this in my next project.

I'm glad you found the content enjoyable.

I appreciate your response. Constructive feedback helps me improve!

Best regards,
Carmen
 
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