feedback on a trailer for kickstarter narrative feature

[kevin baggott]

never mind

 

[jghenderson]

The biggest issue is that it's just too long. I would try to stick closer to 2 minutes.

Also I think it would be a good idea to try to do some sound mixing and coloring for the trailer, just to give the people on kickstarter an idea of what they'll be paying for.

 

[gonzo_entertainment]

It's a bit long and was left with no idea what it's about.

 

[sonofaresiii]

Kinda boring. Turned it off after thirty seconds or so of seeing people walking slowly/sitting/not doing anything-- I'd suggest starting with a bigger bang. Not literally, but pick your best/most interesting shots/sequences and stick them at the front.