feedback for grabs from a scene for a short

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thewheel

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hi everyone, i am posting some grabs from a screne i shot earlier on this year. I am trying to put a short together. I adjusted the levels. Could you give me some feedback as to the look and anything you might come up with. In the scene I am trying to show a family as they wake up in the morning. With your feedback i would like to decide if I should keep the scene or if I need to reshoot it. Ultimately i would like to submit this short to a local competition later on this year. This is my first project and hence also my first with the dvx but I would like to produce something with a professional look. thanks. i did manage to have the images here sorry so here are the links.

http://esnips.com/doc/a9dcfe48-b6d6-43d3-abdd-42c483fee4e4/3-shot.bmp

http://esnips.com/doc/40ca557e-c4a8-4347-b80c-0d037eea01a2/2-shot.bmp
 
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i would like to darken the background - the wall on the left of the curtain. by darken i mean - today i realise that ideally there should be no light there since the light is supposed to come almost from the curtains direction. can you suggest a way how i should approach this in after affects. one slight problem is that in the footage the lady sits on the bad and hence she is right in front of the background. should i hence do a frame by frame touching in AE? or could i pick certain colours found in the background and replace them with darker ones. i am a bit green in AE so some basic approach would be greatfull. many thanks.
 
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