MUSIC VIDEO: Feedback Appreciated!

[jeshraghian]

Hey guys, I'm a 20 year old guy from Perth (Australia) who bought a camera a long time ago and decided it'd be cool to teach myself how to film stuff in my spare time. I'm forever keen on taking critique to improve and whatnot, so anything that tells me what to keep doing (or better yet, what to not keep doing), and how to improve would be awesome

Thanks!
Jason

 

[Steve_Karl]

I thought it was very good and has a worthy story.
Even though I can't stand to listen to this type of music ... aggressive and hostile etc. ( I had it muted for most of the video )
it works for the story and it all makes sense, if you can make it to the end.