Feature Film Trailer!!

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Sen3Films

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Hey Guys,
I wanted to share the latest trailer for our upcoming feature "DIVISION". I've learned a lot from this forum and wanted to show my work.
We are currently seeking distribution for it and what a fun process :)
We shot with both the HVX200 and HMC150
Looking forward to your feedback
*note: I posted this in the HVX Forum but I also wanted to post it here seeing as how more than half was filmed with this camera. Love this camera!

 
Pretty cool! Only thing that jumped out at me was there are a couple fights where the person doing the hitting very obviously doesn't actually hit anyone, i.e. 1:41, 1:49
 
custerc said:
Pretty cool! Only thing that jumped out at me was there are a couple fights where the person doing the hitting very obviously doesn't actually hit anyone, i.e. 1:41, 1:49
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I noticed that, but tok it as they were training her, and just teaching her how to dod the fighting moves. I could be wrong.
 
The footage quality was good, but as a trailer I would have to say it doesn't work very well. I still have no idea what the film is about. Which means there was no interest generated in actually watching it.
 
Thanks for the feedback guys! The punch at 1:41 doesn't connect as he blocks it and at 1:49, I didn't want people to know if it did or if she dodged it. It's probably to quick to tell :(
Jim, sorry to hear there was no interest, but I definitely appreciate the feedback :)

Thanks again guys!
 
Well, 'no interest' on my part is the lesser of the points I was trying to make. The major point is that, based on the trailer, I have no idea what the film is about.
 
Aahh I see... As I'm still learning, the line between keeping the audience in mystery so they want to see more and not giving enough is a very thin one (for me anyway)... I'll be cutting a second trailer in the upcoming weeks and it will definitely be in the be on my mind, so hopefully it will come out more clear.
As always I definitely appreciate any advice :)

Thanks
 
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