F55: F55 Commercial

Very funny! Looks great. I'd think a little more of a curve for a commercial would be good but the color palette is really great.
 
Might be my playback, but audio sync was off between the first and second cuts. Also focus seems off on the CU... might just be Vimeo though
 
Just more on the critical side of lighting and art direction (if you're looking for that kind of feedback) between 0:06 and 0:08 you can see the reflected light on your talent come in because it was being moved during the shoot. I would lock that off with c-stands to minimize its movement. Since it does move you can also see it moving in the reflection of the car trunk. On the subject of car I would have used a more neutral color car because unless you have the time/money to light black to reduce the contrast compared to the rest of the scene it just kind of ends up looking like a big black gapping void. A lighter color car would help cheer up the scene and resolve any contrast issues.

Overall it was really good and convincing.
 
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