Everything is permitted trailer, and finished product!

[linkdafourf]

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trailer for the movie,
the full thing is available on vimeo,

at

http://vimeo.com/7738679

for anyone on the forum who has seen it before, i fixed a lot of the audio issues, and i cut some stuff in the begining to help with pacing. let me know what you think, thanks all!

-ryan beacher

 

[mvetanen]

Post it on http://www.triggerstreet.com It is a good site to get a lot of realistic feedback for scripts, short films and such.

It looks like a student film, in my humble opinion.

 

[linkdafourf]

it is a student film...?

 

[andythefilmer]

I like the concept, but it is sort of hard to grip the story, but I can see where you are going with it. Also, you should use a tripod or other ways of camera stabilization, but the lighting was good (I noticed home depot lights) and the colors were good too.