Episode 2 in Web Series, daylight exteriors

[hscully]

www.kellyandlindsey.com

Here's the 2nd episode of Kelly and Lindsey do NY. It' funny. there's a nice 60fps shot of the girls and some challenging daylight exterior stuff. Sound was more of an issue than highlights but we had some challenges there. Great performances. Curious what you think

I have a vimeo link that looks better than the you tube feed https://vimeo.com/63670551 password sparkles

 

[Steve_Karl]

I think it looks good and sounds good and is well acted well shot and well edited.

The scripts total departure from reality and reliance on cliche' stereotypes is where I loose interest.
Sorry to say, I don't think any of it is really funny. I just think it's stupid, and goes nowhere, but that's just me.

I'm not saying it's *not* going to work for others. It's probably a matter of taste.
Even so, I say well done for the acting and production value.

P.S.
Look at 1:18 through 1:21 in the trailer. There's a potential for a dark side?
Your team could be great with a good writer, or maybe it's about a commitment to do more than just pre-teen silly?

 

[hscully]

I think it looks good and sounds good and is well acted well shot and well edited.

The scripts total departure from reality and reliance on cliche' stereotypes is where I loose interest.
Sorry to say, I don't think any of it is really funny. I just think it's stupid, and goes nowhere, but that's just me.

I'm not saying it's *not* going to work for others. It's probably a matter of taste.
Even so, I say well done for the acting and production value.

P.S.
Look at 1:18 through 1:21 in the trailer. There's a potential for a dark side?
Your team could be great with a good writer, or maybe it's about a commitment to do more than just pre-teen silly?

I didn't write it. I was the DP and editor. These girls have a following in NYC and it's an extension of a live show they've done that I understand is more outrageous. They have the love of the people they're poking fun at. They belong to that community and it is funny stuff to them. They go a lot further in the next one, perhaps it will seem less cliche to you. It was pretty crazy to me. I appreciate your comments and thanks a lot for checking it out.