ScottPictures
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Hi, here is episode 2 of our little show Earth Defense. We are hard at work on episode 3. Your feedback would be awesome.
http://earthdefense.blogspot.com/
http://earthdefense.blogspot.com/
Earth Defense
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Loki
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Wow.
i am not sure how to respond... that was atrocious.. like really horrible..
I had no clue what the hell was happening.. its like you started shooting mid way through your story.. and just forgot that there was any kind of beginning..
The acting made me want to burn myself....
I hope this is a joke of some sort... cause.. this seems like it would fight nicely on www.somethingawful.com...
I am gonna go have a nap...
i am not sure how to respond... that was atrocious.. like really horrible..
I had no clue what the hell was happening.. its like you started shooting mid way through your story.. and just forgot that there was any kind of beginning..
The acting made me want to burn myself....
I hope this is a joke of some sort... cause.. this seems like it would fight nicely on www.somethingawful.com...
I am gonna go have a nap...
Ryan Patrick O'Hara
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Well, it seems your compositing skills exceed the film making process.
The helicopter was a nice CG element. The running through the parking garage was very smooth. I'm guessing you were in a car?
Other then that it was an amusing film because of the effects and acting. I really enjoyed the establishing shot of the skyscraper, and thought it was funny that when you cut into the office building I could see a tree and cars outside the window. Those guys must have gone cheap and rented out the first floor of that tall building!
In the future I would suggest working on lighting, and coaching actors.
I am not raggin' on ya. This stuff reminds me of when I and friends of mine were young. We made stuff like this all the time. I can tell you're the same way because about every character is the same age (young guys). It seems that your camera movement, and some of your special effects are your strong points while acting, lighting, and well acting are your weak points.
Most important is to keep doing what you are doing. Pretty soon episode 8 of Earth Defense will look nothing like episode 2.
EDIT: HAHA!
The helicopter was a nice CG element. The running through the parking garage was very smooth. I'm guessing you were in a car?
Other then that it was an amusing film because of the effects and acting. I really enjoyed the establishing shot of the skyscraper, and thought it was funny that when you cut into the office building I could see a tree and cars outside the window. Those guys must have gone cheap and rented out the first floor of that tall building!
In the future I would suggest working on lighting, and coaching actors.
I am not raggin' on ya. This stuff reminds me of when I and friends of mine were young. We made stuff like this all the time. I can tell you're the same way because about every character is the same age (young guys). It seems that your camera movement, and some of your special effects are your strong points while acting, lighting, and well acting are your weak points.
Most important is to keep doing what you are doing. Pretty soon episode 8 of Earth Defense will look nothing like episode 2.
EDIT: HAHA!