Early DVXuser HorrorFest Entry Re-Edited

[greeches]

Feedback welcomed!

Shot on DVX100 w/ Panasonic shotgun mic

Shot in 4 hours in 2006

2 Actors and 1 boom pole operator

No color correction

Edited in Vegas

 

[lawriejaffa]

Yeah i liked a few of the shots and the grotesque make up, but the story/expoloitation shlock factor came across as a bit immature tbh. Simplistic with a possible few /what just happened - type reactions.

But the FX and things I really liked - perhaps a darker more contrasted grading would improve the blood shots a little?

So - cool, but perhaps with more of a story and point to it all next!

 

[ikander]

Yeah, I feel sort of the same way. I think your technique is just fine. It's the story (or lack thereof) that brings it down.

Good movies tell good stories.