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Overall nice work. I think you'd be surprised how much a professional voice-over could change the whole piece.

That's just my 2 cents. If you're worried about them screwing up your timing, have them read to a window-burn in the booth.

I think "workmans comp" needs an apostrophe. D'oh.
 
I think its great for what it is. Definetely consider the pro voiceover. Try a freind who has a good voice and see if the results are any better.
 
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