DVideoclipX100, please comment it!!!

FabioRafael

FabioRafael

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It's a not-finished part of the video clip, but it's already possible to have an idea of it. It was shot at night in a high-school in Brazil. I know that the people in the back are too calm and I am thinking of getting rid of the scenes with them. I really need your comments for it's my first video clip and I have a lot to learn. If anyone can give me a clue about digital filter to make it more videoclip looking, please feel free!!! ( It's a hip-hop group called PR-15 singing in Portuguese, the song is about the night, parties, girls and the fear of getting in trouble at night )


link: http://www.trigitalfilmes.com/pr15 4.mov ( quicktime 6 / 720/480 )
 
Good effort FabioRafael. :)
I know that the people in the back are too calm and I am thinking of getting rid of the scenes with them.
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One of the things that really sticks out in this shot more than the lack of enthusiasm from the people in the back is that there is no movement on your camera. Your other shots have motion... then your wide shot slams on the brakes. If you can, I would try to dolly, crane or steadicam some movement into it. I think you'll be suprised at the difference this will make.
 
yeah I do agreen the people in the back have to go or do something just kind of brings the energy down. Also a slow dolly or jib shot or something on the wide shot would also help the flow.
 
I told them about that and they still do not have any permission!! I guess that if they get in trouble they will have some publicity. Let's hope they find a way!
 
I agree, the people in the back are so boring they actually distract from the action. Quicker cuts might hide what they're (not) doing in the back. But if the cuts are too quick then you'll have an even bigger problem. Headaches.

Only DJ would recognize that song. :) You've got some good ears.
 
I actually feel really bad about this! I just hope I am able to create a video clip which does not have anything to do with the original!!! Please, keep commenting!
 
isara said:
Only DJ would recognize that song. :) You've got some good ears.
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:thumbsup:

I did like the location you shot at though. Some nice wide angle shots would look nice w/ those rap videos. Was everyone in the background an extra? Some of them kinda look like "wtf is going on here?" Do all the guys rap in it?
 
Thanks DJQuikFingaz! We were at breaktime in a high-school, the people only knew that there would be a videoclip shooting, but we did not have time to explain it to the students so that they could get "a little happier". We shot the whole video clip four times so, at the end, they got more crazy and I hope I can replace the "still" scenes with those. It's sad I did not have either a dolly or crane to shoot that front scene.
 
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