Drug Film - Health Class

I would work on the audio the levels seem to jump every shot. I like the b/w. instead of having the needle right when he opens the drawer it should he hidden away like it would be in real life and he should tie a belt around his arm (looks dramatic) and you should make the transition from the bedroom to the bathroom a little longer, seem like he just appears in their. the puking look good. i guess the part with the bath tub is incomplete. i won't comment on. you also need some kind of a soundtrack.
 
I think I heard you say "OK" right before he started smacking his arm.
Was that a mechanical pencil you used for the needle close up?

The audio levels were a bit off, other than that it looked ok.
 
the new cut looks a lot better....

maybe you should add some fact at the end...like "1,000 kids die every year from drug abuse"

or something like that....
 
yea we have still the ending to shoot. the kids bro walks in on his abandoned needle and thinks like, my bro is cool, so imm gonna try this. and its like

your are hero to someone.

and hero is red, and then it fades to heroin.
 
this is my health class project... i think using this song is fine lol. but yeah im shooting the last scene today so ill take all this into account,
 
Newer cut is better... music seems a little odd.. don't get me wrong - it's good at certain points, and I like it... but it doesn't stick.

Looks good though.
 
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