Driven - A Short Film

[Matthew Macomber]

Just wrapped up my new short titled "Driven." It's about a 19 year old named Connor Reid who can't afford to go to college. However, his love for photography and his drive to succeed are all he needs to find happiness. This was a personal story I wanted to explore through heartwarming drama and emotion. Got feedback?



http://vimeo.com/11766032

 

[dre83]

It's not bad. So don't stop making films.

But some advice:

- the acting is a bit...one level speaking... monotone
- the sound is ok, don't know if you used soundguy with boom and mixer ?
- It can have some more sound design (street outside, wind outside maybe,
- the story itselfs is a bit... less... it's to long. Guy wants to drive himself, guy takes
part of a photo contest, guy takes picture, guy wins..the end.

But as I said...take this as an advice.