Draft of my next short: The Hair

[jonE5]

http://vimeo.com/6095098

Been working on this for a while, need to do some color grading and correction, but im a n00b at that and have no idea where to start, any tips?

I think i may re-record the monologue, I stuck to the source material for the first half, but after the party starts i pretty much ad libbed the rest to avoid having to re-write some of it.

Thoughts?

jon!

 

[damonb]

Re-record the monologue. Stick to what you intended. More important than colour.

 

[jonE5]

Yeah i will do, im getting access to some workstations with final cut pro on them, so hopefully that can make this process a bit easier.

jon