DOPA final cut ready

Re: DOPA final cut ready

Nice job, Eco.

I liked the look and the editing. I'd love to see a 30 sec version. I think that might make it just a bit tighter. Look, lighting and pacing all good though.

Mike
 
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Still like it... but maybe I'm just dog biased and can relate to having a dog ;)
 
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I liked it when the dogs humped. I didn't dig the dark look. It reminded me of the movie Forces of Nature. That movie sucked all the way around.
 
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Awesome! very fun to watch. love all the humping...love when the couple are kissing and they come out and try to hump them, so awesome!

good job man. im going to forward it to some friends.

peace
 
Re: DOPA final cut ready

Awesome work ecoloco. I think it can be a little shorter and tighter in the editing but otherwise all the elements work really well together.
 
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I think its a good concept. Some of the misbehaviors could be more direct and clear, and funny for that matter...the humping is quite clear and funny, but I think conceptionally everything should be at that level. Right now I leave this spot just think of the humping as funny, everything else is trying to be funny and "smart" but isn't quite there...I guess you could say the "writing" needs to be a bit stronger.

As far as editing goes, I think it needs to be way tighter. This spot definitely lags in parts. There is no reason this couldn't be cut as a 30, and it would surely be quite a bit better.

I have to give it to you though, its hard to go wrong with mascots running around raising hell.
 
Re: DOPA final cut ready

Thanks for the comments. The spot was thought to be a 60, we are contemplating a 30 second cut as well.

Eco
 
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i think it dragged. i loved it though, i didnt know what it was until the end, will this be running in chicago? what stations/times? maybe tighten it up a bit if you can.
 
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