DOPA :60 roughcut

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lol hilarious! Seems long for an ad though, plus it be nice for the actual info to stay a little longer.

If you can get the guy humping the girl on TV you'll have my utmost respect! :eek:
 
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thats awesome! great job man, love the humping bit, and the bike gag.

i think its good to have a 60sec, maybe try a 30 for kicks.

peace
 
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Thanks a lot. Yes, the song is from Iggy pop, but it's just for placement, we have a couple of guys working on an original score as I type. The logo is going to be there a second longer. As it is , the cut is in 58 seconds, so we'll compensate wiith a little more branding. We are still working on this cut, I'm trying to se if I can put a nother really hilariuos bit in there. I think this cut works well, though.

Thanks again for your comments.

Eco :)
 
Re: DOPA :60 roughcut

Verry funny stuff--and nicely done. Just a suggestion--shave about 22 frames off of the beginning of the shot where the bicycles enter from the left. That way the energy from the previous shot where they chase the bikes is sustained across the cut.
 
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Is that a spot for the free DVD? And you shot it with Oscar? Small world (I do a lot of ads for the project myself).

I liked it plenty. Very well done.
 
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Steve, yes, this is a project I shot for Oscar. The cool thing is that it will air. We have a more recent cut though. I posted it in this page. Vheck it out.

Eco
 
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Very funny indeed! Nice gags mixed in.

It does seem a little bit long for a commercial. If you had some teasers during the shot. A flash of text saying "Is" then another "Your"... then "Doggie"... and then near the end "Misbehaving?" and finally a transition into the finish. Sorta string 'em along for the message.

Just a thought.
 
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