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Looks great, very professional. The advert was absolutely hilarious, esp the fat guy, he was very good. Lol the shot of him at the end was funny but then awkwardly long. I thought the cd grabs could have a sound effect, and maybe a split-second cut to black before it's playing and they're being blown away.

I'm jealous you got to interview Paul McCartney! You mixed all the footage very well.

The Charlie Higson could've used some more shots, esp a punch-in to his face when he starts talking. Also, it looked like you were on autofocus the when he holds out the book, the focus was all over the place for a second.

At the beginning of EA-Sims, I think we need to see the woman speaking for just a moment before you do all the cool fast-motion effects. Also, the music made me want to pop X, not listen to what she was saying. I think at the very least, the volume needs to be turned down so it's not disrupting the pace (also bc the woman is a little hard to hear). I liked the pace of your shots at 50", but I think there are way too many fast-motion shots of the gallery; it was a little disorienting.

On the other hand, I thought some of your videos were a little slow, like how the JJ Mood video shows actors slowly pulling out their kits. It made me go "ok, I got the point - he's got one, too. Now move on to the next person." But some of that is just me acting a.d.d. and being used to fast-paced online content.

The steadicam in the lingerie videos is very good. There's a few awkward shots at 30" in shoot 4, but otherwise, awesome. The dolly shots in shoot 1 are amazing. I can't get over how good that first shot looks. You could show me that shot and then cut to a video of grass growing and I'd still watch it.

That's all just nitpicky stuff. Like I said, the videos are really good.
 
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