SHORT: Dick takes advantage of Ginger kid

I actually thought the color was the best part of the piece. Aside from that, it was ok. I think the "serious" speech the ginger guy gives is too long. Your intention here was obviously comedy, but his speech went on so long it made me confused as to exactly what you were trying to do.
 
Thank you for your thoughts! Glad you liked the coloring. Speech might have been a touch long, you are right.
 
Some better edit (mostly it's just about 2 frames more or less),

you have a serious "continuity" problem... I hope you know which one :-p

The sound is good, but did you let him shout "chocolate milk" also in the other shots when he's not in screen?
 
ok, I see. But when I saw the big splash I expected to see more dripping...but it just "finished" dripping then, or it was not so much as I thouht :-p
 
We were only rolling one camera. So by the time we got the next shot set up after the splash it was dripping as much.
 
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