"DIARY OF A HIT-WOMAN" DVD now on sale!!

[PeckDun]

Hey guys and gals just wanted to let everyone know my latest film "Diary of a Hit-Woman" is finished and on sale. I've learned ALOT from this forum and I hope it shows. We are all very proud of this film and we hope everyone enjoys it.
Diary of a Hit-Woman

 

[PeckDun]

55 views and nothing... I know you guys got some constructive criticism in there somewhere... Please don't be bashful... any and all advise will only help me become a better filmmaker...

 

[twocik23]

Oh here goes...

I think that everything looks very well done, it's just not really grabbing my attention like it should. However it's 6am here and I'm passing out at that wheel. I think you should have added in some wider shots, maybe a few more outside (in the trailer). The table shot with the drugs looked like your light was right on top of it, just a hair overexposed or something I'm not really feeling. I think the website box tear out makes it look and feel low rent while watching the clip. The font could be better.

Score wasn't bad, but maybe something a little more grasping. A few whooshes here and there might jump your crowd.

Ok now onto the good. Anything with a pov shot I love, don't ask why I just do. Lighting and shots were all awesome! The story looks cool.

Nice job !