Demo Reel for Critique, please

Hey Dana,
I like a lot of the cuts you had, but i felt like it was a little long - maybe cutting it down to shots/scenes you felt are stronger than others should make it a lot more solid. But overall great work!
 
so here are my positive criticism:
1. may be convert the demo into HD (hint: Redgiant's instant HD)
2. i really like 3:01 to 3:27, the ways its composite and edited. perhaps you can use revision fx's twixtor to slow down on the red downward arrows to give a perspective of Grand Theft Auto kinda style (just a thought).
3. the way you introduced the groupie (i mean edited) could be better, i think one way would be do something like they did in the movie Feast 2 (the intro of characters)...just a pointer...and don't wanna spoil your own voice / style.

overall, you have a great potential...keep it up! best,
 
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