Demo Re - Feedback

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Ulysses Adams

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Okay, so based on the last critique I attempted to modify my demo reel. I deleted some less impressive stuff and in result I made it shorter so that's always good. Any feedback on this would, of course, be much appreciated.


http://vimeo.com/40338648

Password: demo
 
I didn't get to see your other cuts , so I'll just comment on this.

THE BAD.....
The open and close just seemed too candid or childish. (Maybe just black or a mild blue gradient with some nice font???)

Girl at :27 drop it. Reel should show your skills, not try for cheap titilation.

Purple scene at .32 drop it. Banding was all I saw for the second or two it was up. (banding just was the first thing I noticed, rather than the scene)

Girl at 55 and 1:09 drop it. (really, really drop 1:09) wayyyy too porny. Bed, camera, tripod, lights, (unless porn is ALL you ever want to shoot.)

Guy at 1:24 see if you can lighten up his eyes only a little. His eyes look like 2 black holes. (kinda creepy a little)

Couple at 1:36 Drop it. Color tint just looks wrong plus it's too dark.
(might be able to fix it? but I'd just drop it cause the 2 scenes before it and the scene after are awesome.)

THE GOOD....
Loved the music.
All the scenes were good, really really like the scenes at :22 and :24 and :44
scene at 1:30- 1:34 was friggin awesome, maybe move it up towards the front more?
scene at :40 looked great. maybe even tack on another second or so to make it longer?

My 2 Cents....
 
Thanks Chris, I really appreciate your feedback. I made the following changes...I kept the scene at 1:09 and the intro. The intro really speaks on my personality, fun and easy going, creative when I need to be. I made the rest of the changes however and I think its much better. I wouldn't mind if you reviewed it again after I post it up. Again, thank you!
 
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