"Days of reckoning"

Sadly I have had less time than I really would like, so it will be a mad rush to the end. But its happening and I think the storyline is solid.
 
Im done! Though I actually mistyped the title - it should be Day of - not days of. doh.
 
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My excuse for typos and bad grammer/passive writing?

I'm a story teller, not an English teacher.
 
I thought "Days of Reckoning" a little more interesting that just "Day," actually. :) Bit of a twist on a familiar phrase.
 
I agree Mark. I suppose you could interpret whats in the script as days. May leave it that way.
 
HEH That would also be a good title - Days of... DOH!

Cheers Alex. Im still thinking there might be a complete title change. The premise remains the same.
 
I've read it twice now, and my biggest question is what was going on between Paul and Sarah before he "opened his eyes?" What was their relationship?


****SPOILERS****

Before Paul's encounter with the old man, did he not see Sarah's scars? Was he just living in denial? There's a huge chunk of time in the script that is not addressed and I'm struggling to understand how that is resolved with the events in the script.

I'm interested to hear you talk about this script, but figure you'll want some more feedback before you go into it. In the meantime I'm going to have to think about this one some more....
 
Hi mate. Thanks for reading.

SPOILER

On page 1

Paul’s once high
school sweetheart and now wife. She sleeps soundly.
 
good, solid scriptwriting here. i will re-read to see if i can "fill in the blanks" because i'm not exactly sure what the deal is. you're gonna make me think!

i'll get back to you... it's late now though, so it'll be tomorrow.
 
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