D.O.P. Demo Reel Rough Cut

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Mix of footage from the HVX200, HPX500 and the Nikon d5000. The music is original and was written for the reel by a friend of mine. This is a really rough cut but I am interested in hearing any suggestions from you guys on how to make it better! Constructive criticism only...please.

 

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any thoughts?

 

[Eljoninjo]

Hi, first I think you should get more shots in color. To much B&W and desaturated clips. You have some really good clips you should build the reel from. Make it shorter and start with the strongest clips wich I think is the woman sitting on the couch, fittness pass, the bedroom sceenes.

Cheers
Joel