CrossTalk Movie Beginnings

Maxwolf

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Greetings DVXuser(s)!​

This is my first attempt at creating anything that could be called a film. Friend of mine purchased a DVX camera and the quality you can get from that thing is amazing and I have been finding myself becoming more and more involved in the world of film.

Little Bit of What's Going On:
The story revolves around one very demented young man by the name of Eddie. Eddie's cocaine induced rut in life begins and ends in the year 1997. Eddie has always loved understanding the inner workings of electronics and mechanical things just to satisfy that invisible itch in his nugget, more so than often this involves the unauthorized access to or use of data, systems or networks, scanning or testing the vulnerability of a system or network or to breach security or authentication measures without express authorization of the owner of the system or network. Eddie is by MIT's definition a hacker.

The Meat:
Listed below in the following order are the entire introduction (6:29Min@28MB), a scene involving a "reverse sting operation"(5:55Min@25.6MB), and finally a full live video shot of Eddie taking a stroll down the main drag in Yellow-Springs(2:23Min@25.6MB) in hunt for an emergency roadside telephone.

Before reading onward, know that my methods are by no means standard.

The introduction was created in PowerPoint with graphics which started in MS Paint, A program I wrote that converts pixels into ASCII equivalents, Notepad, and then into The Gimp where alterations were made to create the letters used in the first place.

I "filmed" the special shots with a freeware desktop capture tool called CamStudio direct from a formatted presentation window. The same was done for the spectrograph line in the beginning which was "filmed" in GoldWave which was also used to do most of the audio effects. (Audio is from a 1970's joke line, old school phreaking days of crossbars and step-by-step masterings. Blue box stuffs.) All of this was put together using of all things Windows Movie Maker 2.0 which is not that bad of a program despite the fact it assumes my IQ is 42. Why all the fuss? I wanted to prove that maybe with the help of critics that you could create enjoyable content with no money and the most basic of tools readily available on the internet.

A little on the "reverse sting operation". Eddie has a hobby of hunting for undercover folks on the net. He has a large friends list of undercover cops running sting operations for things like rapists, pedo's, drugs, gang activity, etc. In this scene Eddie finally gets the guy to ask him for some pictures which he has so happily prepared in advance. I know it's 1997, but Eddie is a smart guy and the idea of embedding malicious code into JPEG's ain't nothing new. He knows the other side is going to look at them so this is the perfect opportunity to steal some information. Because that is what it's all about, right?

Entire Introduction

Police Sting Operation

Yellow-Springs Introduction
 
Hey,

I really enjoyed your graphics style in the introduction. That is pretty unique and kudos for not having to resort to the latest and greatest software to create something interesting. Keep it up.
 
First of all, I want to say that this in unlike anything I've seen posted on this site before. So that's good. You have an original voice, which is a huge advantage in this industry. Your use of mood through music and graphics was eerie and different. It went on a little too long and I thought you could've done some flash-cutting to other things during that initial graphic to spice it up a little, but, like I said, the establishment of a unique and original tone was achieved. The production value was not very good however, with very little lighting giving the image a generic quality. This sort of negates the mood you initially set. That pullback from the laptop was cool, but it wasn't lit well, and so all you're thinking is "this isn't lit well". Overall, I think you have an interesting take on the world, and should keep shooting until you understand your style a bit better. When that happens, you'll be unstoppable.

p.s. haven't looked at the second 2 yet. Will take a look soon.
 
Just checked out the Entire Introduction. I thought the style of the intro was cool, but I thought it dragged on for quite a long time. I found myself losing interest during it, why does the conversation have to go for so long? Also, the computer booting up sequence with the credits seemed to drag as well.

When we get to see Eddie's place, as c.g. eads pointed out, the fact that it's not lit well really takes away from what you want us to be seeing, and instead we're distracted by the fact that the quality is lacking. I really liked the shot though of the focus pull from the cigarettes to the keyboard in the background, that was very cool.

I think it could be tightened up a bit, but you do have some good stuff in there, keep at it :)
 
Thanks alot for all of the input. I was a little scepticical about posting them in the first place for the same reasons everyone was pointing out so that is a really motivating factor. I will be combining the first two scenes after going over them with a pick-comb. Thanks again everyone!
 
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