Critique please

Nice. It definitely has a Napoleon Dynamite aesthetic. I've got a few ideas that might help.
Managing colors, especially in costumes, could help reinforce the look. I would pick a pallette or two and stick wtih those, avoiding all others.
I would have put the CUs of the two girls in after their pan up two shot, so we know they are sex appeal and not main characters.
For the shots against the black cyc, I would have used a backlight to keep his dark hair and collar from getting lost.
Shots where I can see the cam op shadow jump out to me.
The set you're using for the fish parts isn't very visually appealing.

Overall it's really fun and capitalizes on being lo-fi. You should watch the videos with Beck's "The Information" album, they feel similar to your project and you might get some ideas.
 
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