critique my wakeboard video iPhone compatible

[steev'sHVX]

all shot in one day using My HVX200,polarized filter, letus extreme,nikon 50mm,28mm,and 100mm oh and a couple gopro HD shots on a DIY pole that extends to 9ft

http://www.upearlyproductions.com/upearlyproductions.com/WAKE_VIDEOS/Pages/THANKS_FIFTY1FIFTY.html

thanks for watching!

 

[RebelD]

enjoyed it!

 

[steev'sHVX]

thanks a lot!

but i want someone to tell me my flaws and tell me what they did or didnt like.

thanks for watching all!

 

[steev'sHVX]

tell me what i suck at