Critique my showreel

my?illu

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Hey guys!

Just graduated from film school and this is a link to the work that I've done during my time at the school... Which is just two years really...

Hope to hear some criticism from a forum I know and respect so much!

http://vimeo.com/11494784

Thanks in advance!

PEACE and LOVE!
 
Thank you! Now that i'm graduated... I am officially unemployed!!!

Too much Blood for my old taste, Murder as entertainment does nothing for me, I stopped watching when zoombies came on with even more blood. Over the years I've shot many real life crime scenes, not memorable events.

enjoy the unemployed que.

or, maybe try a subject that "lifts the soul", rather than "shock n awe". (just my old ideas), otherwise looks good... now the trick is to make a living out of what you have learnt , taht will be be your hardest endeavour.

Cheers
Tom K.
 
looks ok to me, didnt really mind the blood and guts short but it screamed film student in my opinion. i notice you have introduced yourself as a writer/director but have your reel done in a way cinematographers and editors market their reels, with music and effects. why not highlight some scenes you actually wrote and directed to give people a sense of what you can do? otherwise just looks like a bunch of shots with music.

good luck.
 
Have to agree with Mickey.

I really liked the bit with the kid takling while zombies are coming up behind him. It'd be great to hear what he's saying, as I'm sure it's a clever idea.

I'd cut some of your best scenes together to show off your directing skills. Maybe even edit them together in a clever way, even though they're scenes from different films. Just to further show your abilities.
 
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