Critique my reel please

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Please guys need your advice on what to cut, what to keep sorry its not all hvx footage but dont know where to put it to get responses
Cheers
 
ok i checked it out.

seemed a tad bit repeditive to me. some shots i feel like i kept seeing:

the paypal ad (white seemless shots)
the shots of people in the woods
the night scene

i bet you could cut it down 30 seconds and have a spot on reel
 
It seems like a comic piece (the guy at the end). A cinematographers reel to me is to show consistency in lighting, good composition and camera movement.
It was good to watch, but seem to be edited to the music. I would use
another song... something more cinematic.
And you can use most of your shots as well... there good.
Hope this helps. My 2 cents
 
Sowza said it all. Seemed too comedic because of the piece. I would also cut the guy at the end with the dialogue. Maybe use it but with the green screen keyed out. There's also a couple of shots that don't need to be in there.. one through the car window and that.
 
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