Continuity?

To be completely honest, I am not sure why you are cutting in such a fashion. Some of the continuity was fine but towards the end if felt kind of funny to me. Also, try and plan out your shots a bit. I think your shots will look better if they are framed and use better angles. What you have is decent for continuity, but I think more interesting shots will help. One other small point, watch out for moving actors in a shot and maintaining focus.
 
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