COMMERCIAL: Contest Entry: Pursuit | 2012 Zip Line Gear Video Contest Entry

DivadWaldoss

DivadWaldoss

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Hey Guys!
Please go check out my video for this contest! If I win I'll get a Canon 60D!! Part of the contest is based on the number of YouTube views, so PLEASE share it on facebook, twitter, etc! Thanks!
*IMPORTANT* Also be sure to read the description!
 
I think it would have been more effective if you focused more on the box itself. I always think a shot of the guy opening up the box with a smile on his face with an insert of the zipline in the box would have really added to the punchline of the piece.

My other biggest gripe was the scene when he get's "stuck" in traffic. I know you couldn't find an actual traffic jam to shoot in, but you should tailor the story to what you have. As it is, it made the whole thing a bit silly. I think it's important for the video itself to be very serious, which would increase the impact of the punchline at the end.
 
That scene with "traffic" turned me off. Fight scene was pretty cool.

I would have thought of another way for him to get out of the car, instead of having one truck on the side of the road.

Rob
 
Yeah, I agree completely
However i was in a major time crunch, and I couldn't get enough people to simulate an actual traffic jam. If I would have known they were going to extend the contest I would have redone that scene. It's too late now though, as the contest is partially based on views and I already have quite a few.

What'd you guys think about how I hid the logo throughout?
 
Well,
Tomorrow I'm leaving to go out of country, and I wont be back till the last day of this contest, which means I won't be able to promote to try to get more views. That being said, I'm making one last bump till I get back.
Any feedback and comment would be greatly appreciated.
Also, What does everyone think about how I hid the logo throughout?
Thanks!
 
Hey everyone!
Last day of the contest! If you haven't already, I'd really appreciate if you'd check out my entry!
Thanks so much!
 
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