I think I saw your last trailer, can't remember it too much (didn't post, was rushing for something I believe), but from what I can tell, this one feels a lot more tight. It's put together better.
The only thing is, and I gotta say this, it feels like a 'yeller'. Just a word I came up with on the spot, but you know those trailers for movies where everyone yells? It seems like they chose any moment that people 'yell' in a film just to help build dramatic effect. I feel that about your trailer and it's really the only thing that bugs me.
Aside from that, it's solid, it works, and it gets people hyped. Good luck on getting investors. Plus love some of the shots, including the final shot with the fire wings and her green eyes... wow.