comedy sketch - comments please!

[AdamTheGreat]

me and my friends got bored last night and wrote and filmed a comedy sketch in a couple hours. Please give me some feedback/tips on production quality as well as comedy!

He's the Man
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dMS2QDkstrE

 

[AdamTheGreat]

here it is in better quality... i shot 60i and edited with FCP, i checked deinterlace when i exported so does anyone know why its still got interlacing lines through it?

whoops... here it is:
http://www.stickypod.com/videos/data/1/he_stheman.mov

 

[Robbie Comeau]

better qual? where

i didnt even bother lokoking at utube version, i nevet do anymore

 

[Robbie Comeau]

and do the interlacing b4 exportng, video->deinterlace

 

[AdamTheGreat]

sorry forgot to put in the link
http://www.stickypod.com/videos/data/1/he_stheman.mov

 

[tony240sx]

I have to admit that was pretty funny. The home alone 2 line was the best. The production quality was not so great. There was alot of jerky shots and the framing wasnt that great. it worked for the short cause its just a funny little clip and you just threw it together so its not gonna be perfect. there was also some pretty bad interlacing going on. It was funny though and thats what you were going for. nice work