Im guessing the 'perfect focus' is sharpening which is performed, I guess, as part of the 'colour' process?
The colour is good - you could do some wipes from the ungraded.
Being picky some of the skies lack a little punch to my eye, some of the shadows could have some blue saturation removed and one car as a mild purple tint which feels wrong.
In terms of 'story' and engagement it is a little long and doesn't show too many projects, particularly I dont like returning to autos after you have left them. You could communicate the message in 1/3 of the time.
I appreciate your feedback. I mostly do car stuff so if I take that out there's not much to show. The reason why I spread out the content because I didn't want to have 2 mins of car stuff first especially if someone is looking to hire me for horror or something else. I agree with the wipes and that is something I will include in my next reel.
Well you could do an opening intro.. where you flash through the content for 10s before dwelling on some shots, but having informed the viewer what is coming later.. or you could split the your reels into two 'cars' and 'general'.