** CLIP #2 from 13 HOURS (dvx100a) :42 **

You've got one hell of a movie on your hands, I liked both clips. It is kinda like Saw but then again your right Star Wars had space ships, Jaws and Deep Blue Sea had sharks, why cant you have people locked in a room?

-Edalgo
 
....Im sorry, but that clip was boring (to me). Whats with the speed up slow down stuff? I dont think it worked well (looked like the girl had a mini seizure).

As far as the whole movie goes I cant really say anything since Ive seen like 1 minute of it. As far as clips to tease with, if those two are your strongest... :undecided
 
Sorry you didn't enjoy it Urine. The clips are being posted for feedback on editing, aesthetics, color choices. I got no problem if you didn't like, maybe you could be more specific so you don't sound like a hater with vague comments. "Mini seizure" is the look I was going for. "Speed up, slow down" is what I wanted to make a "weird" feeling. Again, you don't like it, no biggie. Feel free to post something you shot/edited so I can see a bit of your style.
 
crazyczech said:
Sorry you didn't enjoy it Urine. The clips are being posted for feedback on editing, aesthetics, color choices. I got no problem if you didn't like, maybe you could be more specific so you don't sound like a hater with vague comments. "Mini seizure" is the look I was going for. "Speed up, slow down" is what I wanted to make a "weird" feeling. Again, you don't like it, no biggie. Feel free to post something you shot/edited so I can see a bit of your style.
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The pull back from her face isn't smooth and she looks like she's frozen for some reason. I dont think the first shot of the mans POV is needed. And as far as the "weird feeling" it doesn't do anything, it just makes you notice the speed up and slow down it has no emotional value to the shot. If you just do it regular speed it will look fine, I do like the color change when he looks up.

And as far as posting my own footage I'll be shooting a horror movie next month. So, in due time.
 
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