SHORT: Cinematic suicide

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I was in the mood to shoot something really dramatic and cinematic. This is what I came up with. Let me know your thoughts and critiques. Thanks :)

 
Looked nice man, real nice. Good ending.

My critique would be, the first half seemed to drag on. I don't know if it was the pacing or shot choice or what. But it just didn't flow super well.

Good job none the less :) What equipment did you use? camera, sound etc.
 
The GH1 and the H4n are my weapons of choice too! In relation to the film, I would have to agree with Superego Saxton. The panning across the actor from the side seemed to drag on a bit. On three occasions the audience could see that he had a gun tucked in the back of his pants (when he enters the room, when you pan across his leg to the gun at his back on the side shot, and when he takes it out). If it was me, I wouldn't have over emphasised so much with this, particularly on the side panning shot down the actors body and across to his back where the gun is. On the plus side, some of the shots were really great and I liked the actors emotions. This is all just my opinion but I hope it helps.
 
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