OTHER: Cinematic Problem

[charliemcdanger]

Interesting reviews. Of the four people who enjoy your film, two of them are the same person, one seems to share your last name, and the other hasn't reviewed a single other item on Amazon. Then there's some other jerk who clearly didn't get on board.

Don't worry, I down-voted that guy just like you did.

http://www.amazon.com/product-revie..._dpinstantvideo_text?ie=UTF8&showViewpoints=1

 

[Noel Evans]

Goodness where did this come from?

As a moderator I don't usually enter debate, just monitor.

What I will say here to the OP, however is this. You came onto the forum and asked a question and were vague about what you perceived as the short comings of your story. People then offered thoughts and advice from their perception of what they were seeing. People don't know what they don't know and if you wanted to centre the discussion around a particular point then you should have been clear in that goal.

Instead, people didn't see where you were coming from or wanting it to go, and you lambasted them for it.

My comments on this opening, forgetting any audio / cinematography / acting etc issues - it tells me exactly what is going on. However, it simply fails to do it in a way that remotely interests me personally.

Thank you.