CHildren's Movie Trailer

[Bsmith]

that was pretty cool. I agree with kyle tho, as a graphic designer, that was the first thing I cringed at. But it's ok b/c not everyone has that type of skill. Further critiqing the trailer besides the text, the music, while it seems appropriate at first, I felt like I was kinda getting annoyed by it. I think the whole thing would work better with some classical/orchestra type of music if you have access to any.

Other than that, good work.

 

[iain.bason]

TOn a more critical note, I did not like the titles ONE BIT. It really gave your trailer an amateur, unprofessional, unpolished feel that ultimately made me feel unsatisfied. I would try and choose a font that isn't frequented and then give your text some MOVEMENT... it can be as simple as keyframing it to start at say, 80% scale and then bring it up to 100% scale by the end of it's lifespan in the timeline.

For what it's worth, I've already gotten really bored with moving text. Most of the time it just seems self-consciously trendy to me.

I'm not trying to say Kyle is wrong, just that tastes differ.

Otherwise this is great! I can't wait to see more!
-kyle

On this, I couldn't agree more. I'm blown away by the quality of acting you got out of those kids. Most adults can't do Shakespeare that well.