brettsters
Member
here is the link:
This is the first rough cut.
http://homepage.mac.com/brettsters1234/iMovieTheater1.html
This is the first rough cut.
http://homepage.mac.com/brettsters1234/iMovieTheater1.html
check out scene from new short
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IsraelHoudini
Well-known member
Re: check out scene from new short
camera work and lighting : A
acting -cop: B
-victim : C
editing: C
lack of music: F
camera work and lighting : A
acting -cop: B
-victim : C
editing: C
lack of music: F
brettsters
Member
Re: check out scene from new short
The music has not even been adressed. This is the first, rough cut. Much will change. I put it up to show the cinematography and lighting. Thanks for your replies.
The music has not even been adressed. This is the first, rough cut. Much will change. I put it up to show the cinematography and lighting. Thanks for your replies.
brettsters
Member
Re: check out scene from new short
it was 270 degrees of dolly track. I forgot to mention that I was the director of photography, so the other comments I will pass on to the editor and director.
it was 270 degrees of dolly track. I forgot to mention that I was the director of photography, so the other comments I will pass on to the editor and director.
Re: check out scene from new short
i liked your lighting that was great, but the first cut, when he says 'bullshit,' the cuts werent good. wasnt dramatic, it was just quick. i think if you kept the hit in one cut it would have been a little better. but i must say, the lighting and dolly work were awesome.
i liked your lighting that was great, but the first cut, when he says 'bullshit,' the cuts werent good. wasnt dramatic, it was just quick. i think if you kept the hit in one cut it would have been a little better. but i must say, the lighting and dolly work were awesome.
dogstarman
New member
Re: check out scene from new short
I would have used a little more light to establish setting and make the viewer more comfortable. I felt myself almost squinting to see what was going on.
I would have used a little more light to establish setting and make the viewer more comfortable. I felt myself almost squinting to see what was going on.
Re: check out scene from new short
I was hoping the chair guy would cry.....he didn't really seem too determined to get out of the chair either....his struggling seemed very mild.
Some low-playing music in the background or something dude.....too silent!!
I like the lighting, but I think a little more would be better, because the viewer doesn't know whether its an interrogation room, a basement, a run-down warehouse, etc....
Only when you see the second cop do you see some evidence of what kind of place they are in.
Either way, I like the smooth pans...they add to the mood very nicely.
I was hoping the chair guy would cry.....he didn't really seem too determined to get out of the chair either....his struggling seemed very mild.
Some low-playing music in the background or something dude.....too silent!!
I like the lighting, but I think a little more would be better, because the viewer doesn't know whether its an interrogation room, a basement, a run-down warehouse, etc....
Only when you see the second cop do you see some evidence of what kind of place they are in.
Either way, I like the smooth pans...they add to the mood very nicely.