Check Out New Short...

Hodges

Hodges

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Heres my second short film, SORRY. It is approx. five minutes. There is a small streaming version (w/ little to no wait time) and a large version that has a download time of about 7-8 minutes. If you have enough time please download the film to your hard drive (looks/sounds much better).

Please comment!
 
i didnt like the effect at the end. the rest was all good though. theres someone who livves around here named eric cartor. small world
 
cool, some nice shots in there. Under the stairs and so on. The acting got in the way a little bit of me enjoying it as much as i could have, but liked it none the less!
 
I like the begining credits, not a fan of victim shorts though. I like that pan of the boy going into the store. The dad would never throw down his tv out of anger, its an alcoholics greatest treasure!!
 
HAHA. I agree with you about the TV. Yeah the acting is not the best in the world! The "dad" is actually my real father. I had two others lined up for the part but both of them dropped out last minute.

Thanks for the comments keep them coming!

Hodges
 
I agree with all becos the short is really agreable!
The actors are overacting a bit but in the whole the movie is very very interesting, especially some pans and some cinematographic choices!
Next time you should worka bit more with lights - espec indoor - to give more dramatic atmosphere.

My opinion is BRAVO! Becos directing actors (family members or not) is a hard task and you managed to do it!
 
agree with the comments made above. Acting is a little problematic as it pulls you out of the atmosphere you are creating with the camera, but there is promise here...keep shooting
 
Iskandar- I agree with the lighting. I was working with one Lowell Tota. I am still in high school...I'm learning as I go!

Thanks for all of the feedback.
Keep it coming!

Hodges
 
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