Celebration Short Film by Nathandajet

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Filmed/Edited by Nathandajet. Scored by Terry Duennes.

-YEARS OF FIGHTING. A PROMISE IS MADE. LETTING LIFE GO AND STOPING THE BATTLE. BEGINNING ON HIS BIRTHDAY-

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interesting work. very fascinating images captured, very good editing as well. just gets tiring with so much closeups, nothing but close shots gets fatiguing on the eyes and the mind though I guess that can be chalked up to the 'style' of the short.
if this was a longer film with more of a point and story, this particular visual style and editing would be quite moving and captivating. would love to see a longer and more traditional version (by more traditional I mean not an 'artsy vignette' but one with more traditional shots, wider shots, etc)

 

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Thanks so much. I totally understand the Closeup. I only have a 50mm Lens and lights set up and tiny rooms. It was hard to get much wider. lol but I got it. I'll get it on the next one. I'll keep that in mind the whole time while filming.

That's understandable. But I do perfure a more artistry approach. But maybe it could be to much some times. Plus there needs more Sounds and a better beginning giving you a reason to feel sorry for the man. But like you said. Maybe it was better being really close and tight and blank. The character must feel this way after the fact of having no one around and dealing with his cancer. But I dont want to use a excuse for something. Thanks so much.