SHORT: Canon 60D | Sigma 30mm f1.4 | Dedicated to the Struggle

[dadirector89@yahoo.com]

Check out my short film I shot on the 60D with the Sigma 30mm f1.4. It is about the struggles of low income americans, it is more of an introduction to a series than a short film, but any critiques would be appreciated. Thanks. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGAZfFCJ47c

 

[brdplya1]

Dope!

Dope!

I just watched your video.I'm really feeling that. Keep it up.

 

[dadirector89@yahoo.com]

Thanks man. Appreciate the feedback.

 

[jonE5]

I enjoyed it a lot, very nice editing all around. I would have liked a little more of a story arc, but i guess it wasnt that kind of piece. Nice job keeping it fairly short and sweet, any longer and it woudl have ran to slowly.

I also liked the fade in fade out transitions with your actor.

Id love to see you create something in a similar vein with more of a narrative story to it.

 

[dadirector89@yahoo.com]

Thanks JonE5. I definitely am going to try to put out a few more pieces with more of a detailed story. I was the only actor for this piece so I was kind of limited to what I could do. But thanks so much for the feedback.

 

[Vintagemusic]

Nicely done! Meaningful subject, composition, musical track. It's about TRUTH and your film tells it like it is!

VM